/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4018684
>>4018775
i can see it too
a few things that stood out to me

1. on the left, the upper arm. judging by the length in the image, her arm should be coming out towards the viewer at a fairly shallow angle.
the depth cues (line overlap, shadows) on her breasts indicate that the breasts are in front of the arm instead, which just makes the upper arm just look short.

2. bracelet angle kinda looks mismatched to the arm it's placed on, also making it look short (im on the fence about this one)

3. probably something to do with the hand angle and connection to the forearm, but I can't really pinpoint the issue