/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4230311
you went for one of the hardest poses if you don't know it, overlaping mases who are also kinda sof are hard to draw because you need to know what mases to empathize with a harder stroke which is hard at least for me but you need to know the mases in the first place which you don't, this is my attempt but im not that good but is better for you to understand what you should do rather than a redraw.