/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3881289
Yes you do my friend. At least I gotta commend that you didn't do a stick neck like most anime-newbies do... but the rest of that body isn't proportional to that realistic neck you know? If you're gonna do noodle arms do a stick neck, if you're doing a realistic neck then it can't be thicker than those arms.
So make the arms less skinny, seriously they are skinnier than the neck.

How much have you been studying anatomy? I see traces of knowing about it. It's full of holes but right now your main issue is size. Look at how I tried to correct the drawing, I just grabbed different parts on Paint and made them smaller.
The torso was too large, eyes too big for the head, and arms too were stupidly large besides skinny. I tried to add some mass, Tifa is a fighter so don't be afraid of making her look too strong.
But the biggest fail is that head. If she's looking at the side her head should reflect that a bit more, I cut out a big chunk to make it look better but you should study more real people.

How many sketches of real people have you done? Go here https://www.quickposes.com/en and try to copy people. Set it to 1 minute or more, but get down to drawing real humans so you'll see your own mistakes.