/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2517693
Try to make yout shapes cleaner, i know you want it to look painterly but the key to making something look painterly while not looking like shit is to keep the fundementals very clean. Work on your value structure aswell. It's hard to tell objects apart when they have the same values as everything else and it will make your compositions better aswell.
You can study pic related.

Friendly reminder to those just starting out; learning art is not some binary thing where at two years or whatever in you should be at a specific skill level. Everyone learns differently and at varying speeds. Faggots like >>2320803 are just that, faggots attempting to troll. What took someone two years to reach might take you three, or one. Everyone is different.