/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5205905
>>5205990
Thank you, I will check out those books.
>>5206071
Nah man, no inb4, no muh style, I'm here to listen to advice.
Thank you for the redline, very helpful. I can see what you mean by boxy, I'm finding it very hard to get a good long curve for top of head on a tablet. Tablet or no, I have not found a good 'volume' of hair for muh style, or an easily repeatable shape for top of the hair. It's often too little or too much.
I tried drawing the same thing again from memory two hours later. Working on paper is still waaaay easier to get the lines I want. Any tablet line tips? Using a big Intuos.
Will work on some of your suggestions in my next attempt.