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Imaginative painting I started today. Advice/Critique?

>>1783819

Think about the story behind what is happening in the piece. Theres obviously the character standing arms outstretched facing upwards towards the light. Brainstorm what the light is and where she is. Is she on the run and a helicopter spotted her and she's surrounded, raising her arms in defeat? Is she in some chamber partaking in a secret ritual of her organization?

Run with your imagination, tell your story dude.

>>1783566

The point of interest is unclear for me. Are you trying to highlight the helmet or the gun.

I'd tone one down, or add a third. Odd number of points are better for the composition and are more eye catching.

>>1783037

Was this a study? I like it.