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I did some gestures and last time people were impressed. This time they came about pretty rough lol. There are good and bad days, so you gotta keep going to get to the good days.
>>7021157
Good studies!
>>7021244
Learn to feel form. Legs are flat
>>7021608
8/10 add highlights
>>7021370
Excellent
>>7021412
Hey, nice job. And you drew a background!
>>7021454
Looks great tho
>>7021684
Lacking gesture. The poses are a bit stiff, more like action figures set up in a pose than living bodies. I recommend Vilppu’s approach. You don’t have to draw like him, but try to incorporate how he thinks about gesture.
>>7021799
How are you so good what the fuck. What have you been doing to git so gud at drawing? Master studies?
>>7021862
>>7021863
Idk I kinda like yours better
>>7022197
Good job. The pink to blue transition in her hair seems pretty abrupt. Otherwise great though.
>>7022199
Nice! Trad, right?
>>7022359
Not bad. The girl’s calf nearest us has the wrapping lines going the wrong way. To train this sort of thing, you don’t need many lines. Grind primitives and organic forms a la Dynamic Sketching
>>7022410
Commies suck but tanks are cool, good job. Red square is also cool.
>>7022423
Damn good stuff
>>7022483
Yeah it’s annoying how specific drawing skills are. This doesn’t look bad tho
>>7022610
Lovely
>>7022612
Nice anatomy! What are you doing to study it?
>>7022621
>>7022623
Really good. Maybe do dynamic sketching or an anatomy course
>>7022704
Based friend-haver
>>7022876
Kek
>>7022918
Looking forward to it
>>7022947
Love this
>>7022957
Great faces anon
>>7023149
What?
>>7023167
Kinda getting horror vibes
>>7023327
Aesthetic face, anon
>>7023355
Excellent but the cast shadow of her fingers on her head flattens it. Also no cast shadows from her hair onto her chest
>>7023369
Wew, shiny. I like it. I like painterly stuff like this
>>7023390
Looks pretty good, man. He meant use stuff like atmospheric perspective and focal length.
>>7023391
Nice drop