/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I’m trying to mimic Dave Rapoza. What am I doing wrong. Left and center are almost done.
>>6839900
Mwah
>>6843978
His jaw is very rounded. Some hard lines would do this well.
>>6845720
He could have a reflection in the water. But overall I think you nailed it. Thumbnail looks good. So does the full image. The spear metal is a bit odd, but that’s a nitpick.