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Anonymous Sat Mar 30 22:25:22 2019 No.3872998 [View]
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>>3872848
>>3872849
The way you shade your values is flat. I think you're still at the level of copying the shadows as flat shapes and not thinking about light and form yet and why the shadows are what they are, what kind of structure they're conveying, and so on. Take the next step and learn how light form value work. Proko has some vids on this on youtube, and there are some basic tutorials on form and value.
Aside from that, there are proportional issues here and there but overall good job. Keep it up.

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