/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6954124
>>6954128
the torso and angle in both of these references are far different from yours. In your sketch, the torso is pushed outwards making the tits stretched and protruding. In the references, the torso is folded inwards and the angle is from a lower, closer perspective, making the tits look flacid. I think the main issue with your sketch is the torso, it's wide and long, making the tits look unproportionate. The other issue is that they're too defined, making them look too firm. Try something like this instead, personally I find it more appealing this way