/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1993644
>>1993649
Cool, so the issues I see are as follows:
-you image is not warm enough (flames provide very warm light)
-you should include the light sources in your image so it is clear how things are being lit
-you are way too detail focused and aren't thinking big picture enough

I think all the details and the transparent stroeks are ruining the image. I put a filter over your image to simplify it and glazed a bit with a soft light layer for that warmth. From there it is easy to add some small details and proceed. You can see how little information is needed though for a clear read on the image.