/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4546498
Without going into general advice of "loomis" and "learn anatomy" especially the face There are many specific things that are different from the ref and going into detail with everything would take ages. Still I would support you in getting to WLOP's level but a lot of work and human studies will be needed.

Not a bad start though, I would suggest you use a greater variety of values in your rendering becasue it is too uniform. Train your value and color observational skills because they are very much needed in painting and rendering, from this picture yours seem very much untrained.

On the lips, the lips are generally smaller than one thinks, even if they are made stronger by makeup, they never stretch to the corners of the mouth unless you wear clown makeup. The tiny dark corners of the mouth are very important parts of the face to convey the extrepssion.