/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg. Today i couldnt draw much. Man learning figure drawing will be massive pain. I can tell.

>>6741937
cute shota, weak drapery but with such simple style it can get a pass. neck could be thicker but again a lot of anime make pencil necks
>>6741877
i would say her head is too low, isnt pussy higher?
>>6741809
less thinking, more drawing
>>6741771
i would have to actually see your work to give any opinion about it. but you didnt PYW. typical permabeg behavior: not PYWing
>>6741735
thumbs up
>>6741720
i have mine dead flat on the table. but then again i am screenless digichad with maxxed out ergonomic setup
>>6741633
pretty cool
>>6741619
sounds like some overthinking bullshit to me. are you saying you are incapable of drawing still life AKA few items scattered on a table? PYW!
>>6741613
your clothes have 3-2 values but your skin has flat 1 value. That is unacceptable, especially for coom pieces. Introduce more values for skin
>>6741596
screenless chads dont have this problem
>>6741581
i mean it is clearly not a beg book but imho anything is better than grinding cubes
>>6741579
kinda cool but not rendered enough to get thumbs up
>>6741423
https://archive.org/details/PerspectiveMadeEasy/page/n135
>>6741366
if you are asking questions like these its painfully obvious you are turbo beg and loomis is too hard book for you. give a book like keys to drawing a try. Afterwards you will be able to stomach loomis easily
>>6741340
you copy them
>>6741466
imagine if begs actually did keys to drawing
https://archive.org/details/Keys_to_Drawing/page/134
>>6741195
the idea is there, the execution is painfully beg. Keep drawing it will get better. Btw the body of that spray is cylinder but you draw it like its cube
>>6741187
lets GOOOOO
>>6741181
not rendered enough to give any meaningful crit. successful drapery is ALL about how you render the forms