/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2552755

Artist are their own worst critic. I've gotten better, but It's a far reach from where I want to be. Plus I feel when I do these I'm not particularly bettering my art. This is like 3 months ago? I just don't really know what to tackle anymore, but hopefully, maybe, /ic/ critique will give me a better idea what to aim for.

>>2552721

The twist of that rightside girls upper torso seems a bit weird. The other girl looks a bit awkward aswell, like she's trying to get up but her spine doesn't particularly agree with that idea. Plus her hair has a lot of volume for someone on the floor (I'm supposing you drew the head upright without considering it at first). Gravity should be pulling it more downward overall. Sorry if my critique isn't super concise.