/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3037428
I like the scene a lot, just some suggestions
I attached a quick paintover to show:
- fire at night tends to light up the smoke, making the smoke lighter than the night sky
- cars (and other metal stuff) should be more reflective
- on that note, the light reflecting onto the fabric of the person should be softer than that of the plastic petrol can
- think about how the eye is guided around the scene;
I thought it might be cool o keep the power lines at the top-right to keep the eye in the frame, and both the brighter reflections on the street light and car help guide the eye towards the hooded figure.
I also considered making the main "store" sign neon as well so it didn't get so over shadowed by the "open" sign, but maybe that'd be changing too much..?