/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6535294
you also need to vary your lines, again I know its probably intentional but it personally feels weird seeing everything in your piece have the same weight and thickness of line. Thicker or varying lines can be used to lead your eye into certain areas, also dont fucking add the tiny detail like the chain links, belt ornaments or any other detail at all until you have the information of the structure of the entire piece. Biggest mistake I notice on a lot of people and went through myself is artists just want to get ahead and overwork the tiny ass areas that dont matter to your composition, when you waste your focus and resources like that youre inviting burnout to yourself when you realize now you have to sustain the over-detailed look in the rest of the piece or youll hate it. Work on your pieces in passes: small thumbnail for composition, and planning background and foreground>block your structure and foundations>greyscale for locating light sources>color and ornamental details last