/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4516118
You're right, I tried it out and yeah, the body is way too hidden as it is. Tanks, anon.
>>4516432
As always, I like when someone takes a messed up one and runs with it. Nice anime lines. The messed up part of the shirt is quite messy, you should have simplified it so you wouldn't have such a hard time--make your job easier.
>>4516500
Good on you for showing us your process of getting used to the design. I'm a fan of the fuzzypants pose, and the coffee mug drawing's face. The sitting pose has energy, but it's kind of misplaced. In the attached image I show how just some repetition and regular direction of the limbs and such, makes a pose easier to read--and therefore more pleasing to look at. Hope this helps.
>>4517868
No, your design is nice and close, your line quality is low though. You would definitely benefit from practicing turnarounds. I like the basic Microsoft paint look, if you're into that, keep at that style. Reminds me of an old friend who I wish still drew. It's unique.
>>4515912
Nice breasts, but it looks quite rushed. If you planned out the drawing a bit more you might get a better result in the same amount of time.