/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Studying vilppu practice manual. Wish I picked this up before loomis, though there's no telling if loomis has helped me grasp this easier. It's a lot more intuitive than some of the constructive methods in loomis. Anyways, Finding it hard to establish flow and rhythm when drawing from reference. Would appreciate critique and steps forward. Recommendations on color theory/painting resources would be nice too. I'm directionless when it comes to painting, and proper resources seem to be hard to come by.