/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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The pose you have chosen is not great for a beginner honestly. You need to choose poses that show movement very obviously like pic related as an example.
Gesture line is not a contour line of body, its line of movement. Closest thing in body that comes to gesture line is the spine usually. Your lines are also way too stiff, just loosen up and dont be afraid of making mistake. line you first think will be mistake might be the best one