/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1999763
but note please that the muddiness is mainly from you using shadows which are two warm with that very black black, if you want warm shadows use a warmer black. (ie brown) there are also parts where the saturation is off too (cheeks)

i couldn't really do you a proper paint-over, kinda busy and i don't have a tablet here, so here's about 1 minutes with huge soft brush. i tried not to be editorial and change lighting etc.

you can hopefully see that the neck is wrong and the anatomy of the hand is..well, i don't need to say. there are lots of little errors like that.

i think the actual picture is very nice, the expression on the face is very expressive, the girl is beautiful enough (has a bit of an under-bite though) so it's a good picture, you just need to get those temperatures correct.