/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Before I start rendering this one, do you notice any serious errors in anatomy or foreshortening? I'm pretty sure the composition is fucked and needs to have some beach and/or sky added to it (maybe I should even move the horizon upwards). The upside-down girl's right foot most likely needs to have its angle fixed. Yuuka's shoulder needs moderate rework. Anything else?

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Guess I'll have to let my wood be the judge then. As of now, I like the third version the most, but I'll wait and see how it looks when fully rendered. The middle one lacks the seductivity I cherish; it is more of a hungry, impatient look, typical of overly assertive American women (IDK though, maybe that's just movie and porn actresses acting out their part).