/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

attempt 2, which as I said last time I would try to do the face.

one anon told me that the way to capture likeness or to make something look less symbolish was to have more realistic rendering. So I tried my best at that, but mechanical pencil combined with laziness gives you the result seen. I was more worried with the angle of the head and the face as well as the general placement of everything, but I still struggle with making things symboly or stylized.

Any tips or help are appreciated.

I'm gonna keep trying to get her right, whether it be gesture, face, or just a full drawing because muh asian girls. Expect me tomorrow.