/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Trying to do something based off Dragon Quest Heroes. I'm not sure about whether I should go the slime or tentacle monster route yet. Any critiques would help.

>>2329841
I'm not a typical crit. guy, but from what I see:

-That perspective could probably use a bit more z-axis spacing and less x-axis spacing (for the top half of the body).
-Show slightly more torso. It looks like her the top and bottom halves are there, but the connection between the two is either not there or really small, as if it’s a super-stylized drawing I don’t know.
-Go for some harder lines overall?

This is just my “subjective” opinion on the problems. Not sure if it’ll make things look better generally, if you addressed my issues, but it’s what I‘d consider changing at least. Despite all that, it’s not bad, but also not great. Keep up the good work though.