/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4559385
okay the biggest problem is the skull, is too flat i dont know how you are not realizing this, now usually the older the person are they tend to have a larger face if that makes sense usually in younger people the jaw isnt that large nor the nose and eyes in anime at least, now the eyes you drew are way to rectangular, is not like the eyes can't be shaped like that but is not natural in your case, they are almost rectangles, when you close the eyes your eyes don't close in that manner and if they were in a kinda rest position the lower uhhh eyelid shoul be more angular just like the jaw the jaw need to be a bit more angular too but you need to make the skull thinner first or rather the whole head or make the jaw larger whatever, because right now he has an ayy skull.