/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4325900
>>4325960
I completely agree with that anon. You generally just need more knowledge of anatomy and proper proportions. You should push your gestures more.
What I did in this red line is, on the left it's your original gesture with more correct proportions, and on the right a more pushed gesture while also tackling some of the problems your sketch had, aside from it being a flat pose. She only had dummy thicc thighs, whereas the fat should have been more distributed along her body. I have to keep this brief since I'm about to go to bed, but you should study more and keep it up!