/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg, yesterday i was slacking a lot so today i have to post twice or NGMI

>>6371893
Apart from obvious (hair, hairs, beard, eye brows, makeup, jewelry, eye lashes, bigger lips, red cheeks) many people also draw men with SHARP edges while the women faces are drawn with MINIMUM number of lines and they are all smoothed out subtle curves
>>6371705
Keys to drawing pages 108 + 109: soft vs hard edges
https://archive.org/details/Keys_to_Drawing/page/107
>>6371701
That head is completely wrong even if you tried to claim its in anime style. HOWEVER the pic looks very promising, like wow that background and the contrast of foliage and her dress. Next time try to put eyes in middle of skull
>>6371291
Fun with pencil is INT book which is dealing with construction. BEGs need to master OBSERVATION and perspective, good book for both is keys to drawing
>>6371274
You have same issue as me when i am drawing heads: i always make them too wide. Also her neck is way wider. Next time before you post such sketch i suggest to duplicate the layer multiple times (you can even move the sub sequential layers 1 pixel to the left and right) so the lines are actually visible and thicker. It makes it easier to see what we are even supposed to crit and gives you more (You)s. On mobile your pic is essentially invisible and in thumbnail your pic is basically white nothing.
>>6371270
this is why books are superior: 1 small PDF or EPUB file and you have all knowledge without bullshit or filler intros and outros. See >>6358211
>>6371061
now pickup sharpie and make certain lines thicker than others to imply form. Its good copy
>>6371002
You forgot to PYW. And you can always get cheap xppen tablet or scanner. Also tradfags have their own general on IC and even in age of AI nonsense they are still in demand. Somehow some normies are willing to pay for paintings good cash
>>6370847
Find / create photo reference or create the scene in blender or other 3D modelling apps