/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Here's an attempt at >>3001270, construction, sketching, line art, and rendering shown. Any critique is appreciated.

>>3002755
Alright, that's good to know. I think I've just been getting impatient. I've only been studying formally for a couple months, and until recently, I wasn't comfortable coming here for critique. If it usually takes a year or two (at least), I probably shouldn't feel so hopeless, though I do think I need to take my practice in a different direction. Thank you very much.