/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4293149
ok this is my crit, i tried my best to make it simple, i hope i didnt make any big mistakes. for now my personal advice for you is to try make more loose, dynamic lines, like allow your arm move movement, because these drawings seem a bit scratchy, "carved" into the paper. top left drawing - that hip couldve been just this one curved line instead of these bumps, i think its better to draw long lines first and then add details, bumps etc i also see you have a tendency to make your figures and/or their body parts longer than they are. so just keep making ref studies but try to loosen up and measure more, you can even use a liner or whatever. and try to draw something from memory sometimes, that helps getting "comfy" with proportions (at least for me)
i used the loomis method for head in case you wanted to know