/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4256151
Right now your picture seems like you are thinking in a too "flat sense". Think about where your point of view would be.
Personally I like to work in the sense I have illustrated over your image. To use lines to block it off.

Also its very barren. Adding in just simple shapes like poles (like I have done) can give a more sense of the landscape.
Don't be afraid of your lines, that is often what will make a work come to life. Right now you seem to want to replicate what happens digitally and everything becomes a bit sterile.