/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6138515
Looks good, but the lower legs on the girl on the right look odd. The far leg looks too long and I'm not sure if the foot is touching the floor or not. The closer leg has a really big foot. I thought the ass looked a bit too pointy, but it's just preference. Quick redline for demonstration.
There's also something about the grid you used, the squares aren't equidistant so they get squished near the vanishing point. Might want to check that out.