/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

i never ended up getting crit on mine last time I posted but I just wanted to know if im doing it wrong or I should keep trying the same way,, I know the proportions are off on plenty I was trying to get the movements and pose ty in advance ic

I did these awhile ago but someone will say if I did it all wrong

hi, i posted about a month ago going homeless and hungry but a nice couple saved me from the street my dog is okay and we're eating i don't draw much at the moment getting a job and helping clean the house a lot maybe soon i can do some more