/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2102190
Hey man, nice start, I think your values/colours are a bit muddy though. Like there's a lot of areas that can essentailly be one flat clean value, but you have lots of dirty blues and stuff showing through. Like the wall behind her, it varies in value and temperature and colour a lot from stroke to stroke. If you can keep this sort of thing a bit more consistent then it will look cleaner and read better. Overall the image is very cold because of all that blue, it's a bit strange because interiors tend to be warm. Although I get that maybe you are pushing that for the lonely vibe.

Anyways, I did a quick paintover. I'm not sure if I can explain all the things so well, but hopefulyl looking at the image you can see another way of handling your image.