/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2897525
>np dude will do.
Awesome to hear man. I seriously really like your style.

>>2897521
Hm, I feel you aren't sticking to the local colour properly. It's a red object, so why are the shadows that pale purple colour? Yes, the colour of the sky will affect things, but just shift your colour so maybe it is a warm red in the light and a cool red in the shadow. Don't change the entire colour of the object unless it is a white object or something where it can be shifted more easily. Control your saturation a bit more too. Also the cast shadow on the ground has a weird gradient on it, keep it solid. I guess you were aiming for a penumbra but that's not really how they work.

I did a quick paintover, it might not be perfect since I never learned this stuff clinically like through Robertson or Nielson or anything, but I feel it is a little more solid. Keeping that more saturated red everywhere except it goes a bit less saturated for the speculars since the light source is white-ish.