/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5131505
>don't put it down, force yourself to sit and finish it, keep copies in case you mess up along the way and want to go back. This is the best way to push yourself as an artist, don't be contempt with just starting something you like.
This currently looks very nice on thumbnail, all you need to do is to keep polishing it upclose.
One thing I'd like to suggest is removing some of the details from the nose. Upclose the nose tip indicator, the nostril hole, and the nostril edge all look too heavy on the piece and would work better without it. You are using a more high contrast approach to the lines, meaning lines like nostrils could end up being too intrusive for what you are trying to achieve here.
I'm aware this is considered a very anime suggestion, but this is something that's done even in the west, you can see it on frazetta's ink works.
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