/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4865324
Just got a XP-Pen 24 pro. So far so good, It's really cheap for what it is and I'm loving it, the wires are kind of a problem, they can get easily broken if not careful...

>>4833317
for the world:
>the legs and left arm are not at motion yet the line art is inconsistent with the head and diver suit
>the diver thingies on the shoulders seems a bit wonky, out of proportion and at a wrong angle
>the mandible, lips and chin heart piece have the wrong perspective and do not line up with the angle of the rest of the head
>the left arm just looks bad and rushed

the legs and the left arm look good but ive seen jojo and thats not the style the artist goes for, plus again, its not consistent with the rest of the frame. you could have made the right arm look like the left arm to imply motion and have the left arm be consistent with the rest of the line art

also ignore the retards