/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3993761
>>3993705
Owchie it wasn't thematically clear then. Yeah I originally planned to make the top 3 panels blue like my reference but then I got too much into my story and made the blue side clash with the orange side, while giving the big 2 characters both orange and blue rimlight. But yeah that sounds hard to pull off, their pasts shining on them and a clash sounds like a recipe for a lack of focal point.

>>3990763
Separation? Well I filled the sky and empty spaces with black to see how much the characters stand out. But I plan on coloring it like this. Yeah that's it, I should color the heroine like normal and then use different colors for the top 3 events.
Also don't worry you got it right, the left panel was rushed I'll make sure it looks like a scientist and a tube.