/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2941483
Ew. 3d disgusting.
What I was going for is this, if we remove the hair and most of the shading, but:
1) My construction was incorrect from the beginning and the lines are wobbly, to add to that.
2) I stopped caring about these lines after I started rendering.
3) I myself don't clearly understandthe exact angle I wanted to show. I think I wanted to make her glance at the viewer who's about 30 degrees to the left of her head's direction...

The outcome is only natural, I guess. Btw, disregard the "jawline", it's just a leftover from the hair.

I wonder what would be more productive: trying to fix the face in this or leaving it be as a memorial to my mistakes. Both worked for me in the past.