/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3335554
I'm not an inker so take this for what it's worth. Generally you don't want bold dark lines in the "inside" of the body or face, only one the outside. Light low opacity hatching can work better in alot of places. Nipple form is best created with values, but if you must ink, don't use heavy lines and dont draw the entire circle of the areola. The neck was too thick, and the neck and clavicle area was too bold. She had an adams apple. There is a slight outer curve on the neck but it has to be VERY gentle or risk she looka like a man. Check out how Disney concept artists do it. Also her ear looked fucked.