/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3655077
Oh man, I was just experimenting with that and I don't think I got it working but I'll leave my current sketchbook page for giggles.
>>3653689 Very nice, but the gun? Needs more details to read as a gun, only cue right now is the hands gesture. Should convey a bit better what it does visually.
>>3653956>>3653958 I really like the mouse pose and shape design. I feel you need to add some pinkish on his ears though, or suggest more the inner ear with something better than grey.
>>3654339 Great paintover. I dig the hair now.
>>3654497 The pose still wireds me out a tad, there something with the arms and the legs/torso turning that I disagree with. But damn the color makes it look striking! Very persona style.
>>3654554 Far away arm looks forced like that, also thinner than what I had expected. I would do a redline but I'm busy lately working on my own stuff.
>>3654565 Let yourself go and do stuff you would never try out. Or look for ideas in places like random generators.
>>3654830 Limbs look really long, but cohesive so might be a style thing.
>>3654836 Great storytelling, but you should work on your overall drawing quality a bit more.
>>3654899 Looks nice, has a fairy tail vibe to it, reminds me of wendy? I barely recall.