/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3349374
Watch your proportions, see redline. What exactly was the purpose of the drawing? At first, I just figured you were practicing proportions, but then I saw the elf head, so I'm wondering if you're inventing a character.

If it's just practicing proportions, don't worry about making such neat lines. Better to practice again and again doing it messily but trying to be accurate. If this is a character concept, you definitely need to explore some more interesting poses before spending a lot of time on this. In either case, there's no need to hide the hands or feet like you have, you need to practice them.

>>3349391
I disagree with >>3349417, the colours can work, but make sure the values are working first. The composition is okay, but I like the flow/movement if you know what I mean. For me the real problem is that it's unclear what's going on. I see a horse dragon coming out of a hole in the wall, then some teeth floating in front of it's face, projecting the lightning. Is it meant to be a horn? Next thing I would do is really refine all the shapes so that we know what's going on.

>>3349366
To me, this looks cheezy and painted very lazily with not a lot of attention to detail. It's also really ugly, but that can be okay.