/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

you've got style, creativity, just keep going
just spend a little more time on the backgrounds, save fill in for color as a dedicated artistic choice
the op picture is just too strong in that fashion, it's hard to tell what's going on, >>5164715 this one is a much more fluid storyboard style comic
the dilation of the eye is nice and evocative of aeon flux
your paneling is fine, desu it is much more like an 80s style comic, like frank miller. don't be afraid to break the 'barrier' like pic related
I can tell you've got the spirit