/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4885034
>Dodging
His giant ass green body. A bull charge doesn't mean nothing is coming at you. His arms are forward in a charging motion, like I said.

>clash as opponents

The right character is leaping toward the camera. The limbs are stretched and the entire body language is moving toward the camera and away. His left leg is up for fucks sake

>>4885048
>>4885034
I used avatar specifically because of its choreography. They used real kung fu masters, watched them move, and based every single movement on real kung fu fighting styles. I met a man who was best friends in California with their model who was a 5th level black belt in kung fu.

>learn a thing or two about fight choreography

I spent weeks watching martial arts fights as part of a project. You're the one who thinks fighters are squaring off and holding still while one is stretching outward and holds one leg in the fucking air. You must have seen some fighting styles really advanced that i haven't seen where they hold one foot up and lean far to the left off balance like a retard at the start of a fight to intimidate the other guy.

>>4885015
Left is soulless. The eyes are the windows to the soul and the left eyes are too big and cartoons. The art is sketchy in a lazy way, not a intentional way while trying to look intentional. He's gotten lazy and wants us to think it is skill and on purpose. His job probably favors fast sketches over details so details are dropped. I am not OP but I agree with OP so here is my work.