/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6735028
You have very little understanding of the eye
the zygomatic bone
and below
No biggie, you can easily fix this , look at a skull, temporal , eyehole arches , and zygomatic bones of the skull will prolly give you most bang for your buck but learn others if you wish
afterwards look at facial muscles, masseter (chew ) and those around the lips being the most important in my begginers opinion
lips do not fold at the edges of your piece , they are supposed to fold because it streches there when you open your mouth
nose could use some work but its not that bad , check out the cartilage of the nose and try and construct a nose out of it if you can, if not come back to it l8r or ignore it, maybe you can do withouth overlypedantic study, or maybe you cant I dont know
Your left eye (A2) is too big , the eye is inside the eyehole with the edges of the coniuctiva sticking out near tearducts and the lateral edges of the eyelids (Lateral meaning sideways in this context or away from the bodyes midline), surrounded by muscles about halfway in and then surrounded by coniuctiva , coniuctiva and the eyeball muscles are the padding filling the eyehole, when some nerves get damaged and it paralises your eyemovement muscles your eyes can sink in due to muscle atrophy, also starvation will do that.
The A1 is somwhere in the ball park but lacks shadows produced by the arches making the lit up upper eyelid POP
Also already mentioned before in your replyes - Guts is a chad not a chud, (your jawline is a bit wack)