/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

goddamn do i need to force myself to study more and work traditionally more often

in order of what was done first
1- ref >>2686339
im happy with the gesture, got lost on the left shoulder though. proportions are a bit wonky, especially in the legs.
2- ref >>2686343
completely fucked the proportions right off the bat :/ i think im struggling with that the most over all, that torso was drawn too squat and it all went downhill from there. bleh. happy with the right hand and left foot though

3- ref >>2686403
really happy with the gesture, couldnt capture that butt though, somehow his right leg is just too small? either that or i made the right arm too long

this is just what i can see having just done these, any feedback or advice would be greatly appreciated. a redline for number 2 if anyone has the time would be fucking awesome