/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6671147
thanks anon
here's what I feel is the most important to point out. it's a subtle angle but her face was supposed to be in perspective. notice how her eyes aren't at the same vertical level
as I learned from the anons who redline my stuff, if you can draw the centerline correctly, it's half the battle
my construction method is just good old loomis head and the artists I study for faces are higashiyama shou, muk, 2k and some of alke