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>>3056576
I like the motions of the gesture. I think you're getting the idea down. You should try now to use rhythmic lines like in the pic. The lines should flow together to make the motion of the gesture more cohesive.

Your gestures also need a sense of weight and balance. Try adding the ribcage and pelvis to structure the pose. Then learn about the weight distribution of the figure. Keep track of the alignment of the shoulders and pelvis. They usually counter balance each other. Always remember to plant the feet.