/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Alright i finally sucked it up and tried to draw something from imagination. i did use a bit of ref for the clothing design. I'm just glad i didnt want to stick a bullet in my skull during the whole process it wasnt as painful as i made it out to be. Besides the fucked up perspective with the umbrella and the wierd arm position and flatness outside maybe the chest area (not sure how to fix that maybe with more detailed shading?). Is it really bad? I tried my best and i know theres alot i still dont know or understand.