/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3121074
sorry it took a while. as you can see, I'm not all that great, but we all gotta keep practicing! now, I gave the boy I believe you call Sammy softer and rounder features since, at least off the impression I got from your pic here>>3118229 and >>3116542 here, hes got a softer personality. rounded eyes nose and chin compliment it if I may say so. also, simply giving him a set number of freckles instead of randomly setting em allows him to stand out more I think? next the one I think is called Skip. I actually prefer your version to mine but just for the sake of the conversation, based of what Sammy said here>>3118229 it sounds like Skip is rather flamboyant. so perhaps sharper features to show a sharper side of him along with catty eye if he is a clever or tricky. I would have gave him a more slender build as well but this is irrelevant. Finally, I took a shot at your dark elf as well as it seemed his features were very similar to his partner here >>3116542 and >>3118491 here. it seems based off his dialog he is supposed to be a masculine figure. his brows kind of show this but not much else. I would suggest a broader nose and a stronger jaw at the very least to hit that theme home. his muscles cant carry all of it. his face must show more too. of course I'm an amateur artist, and surely others can design your characters way better than I, but I hope that this will help you and you can grow a little more