/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Sup beg, i reached chapter two. it is over

>>7132064
try picking stuff you actually want to draw
>>7132025
RIP. at least now you know why cloud is meme and nothing can replace local backups
>>7132002
welcome to my permabeg world, now all we need is to locate an exit
>>7131999
cute, ambitious. i like it. the girls drapery is very underdeveloped and she isnt visually distinct enough from stuff behind her
>>7131989
stiff, flat. are you using reference?
>>7131975
put the sketch layer on top with multiply mode, renew the gesture and line weight with thick brush?
>>7131966
head should fit into torso 2 or 3 times on average, yours is like 1.5. but then again short people exist
>>7131925
cute
>>7131884
did you forget to make details on her right ear?
>>7131813
there are 999 strategies in digital "painting". the simplest one is to start with very wide brush (500) and then halve its width (250, 100, 50, 25...) as you go. this strategy is mostly called blocking in
>>7131780
if these eyes are supposed to be the KtD project where you draw your eyes then you failed big time. Redo previous chapters
>>7131773
i like your study regime "just draw"
>>7131715
the lack of casted shade on her thighs breaks the form. you want to imply the form by extra dark spots beneath the folds of fabric. cute thot
>>7132085
gesture is kinda like construction: it doesnt matter how it looks like, but how you use it for successful drawing. also many beg books completely ignore it so you can do without it. PYW