/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6507833
this pic has created some buzz so i decide to contribute my too sense on the matter while being mindful of your art style and maintain the general proportions. I do agree with the general sentiment that the picture lacks appeal, in fact i feel like your tendency to draw mostly girls has led to your male characters have this weird uncanniest that makes me feel like looking at bearded women rather than a man. anyway, i draw weeb stuff and isn't fond of telling people to change their artstyle for the sake of appeasing other so I will say to find people within your taste that draws in a similar aesthetic as your goals. two artist that comes to mind are the following:
https://twitter.com/juanmao1997/media
https://twitter.com/Velinxi/media
good luck pal